Eshal Ahmad
Feedback
Newspaper feedback:
Page/Articles: English 9-10
Advisor: Gallo Lee
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- Enough information
- The way you type feels like you are taking to me
- Pictures are matching your topic
- I like your links at the bottom
- Word sizes are fine for me
Suggestion:
- Try to fill up the pages (not to be too empty)
Like your information!
Evaluation Presentation (2nd subject)
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Page/Articles: English Literature
Advisor: Kaelen Lee
​- images are low quality, add more images
​- good size, bullet points, larger text
- add a proper intro
- good topics, add a proper intro
- more detail
- make a clear conclusion
- better images
- more improvements on design
Evaluation Presentation (3rd subject)
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Page/Articles: French
Advisor: Gallo Lee
​- Readable
- Informative
- Very consistent
- Good layout
- Could be clearer
- Good use of icons
- Well balanced images and text
- CTAs work well
- Try to put the french words in one box
- The decorations on the title makes the articles more interesting
- Feels as if she is talking to me
- Make the skills more obvious
- Limited examples
- Well organization
Evaluation Presentation (4th subject)
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Page/Articles: Social Studies
Advisor: Jerry Wang
​- good colour
- add more images
- good icons
- great grid alignment
- good fonts
- easy to read
- good line length
- good bullet points
- some improvement on images
- clear titles
- clear introduction
- covers topics
- add importance of subject
- conclusion is missing/hard to find
- language is clear
Evaluation Presentation (4th subject)
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Page/Articles: Math
Advisor: Jessica Bai
​- great contrast between the colours
- good quality of images
- could add some pictures that are highly relevant to the title
- icons are highly relevant to the topic
- easy to read
- used fonts that are easy to read
- spacing is well
- good use of bullet points
- good visual flow
- Title is relevant to the articles
- Interesting start off
- clear definition
- conclusion could be more detailed
- tone is mostly formal
